Pallavi
24 Nov 2015 09 48 PM
The book took me through the journey of a life of a teenager boy. I felt his feelings and thoughts-as if he was pouring his heart and I was talking to his soul..
It is as if he knew his destiny-Ghaav, Khshana, Bhakta.
It is truly unique and rare. Teenagers do not appreciate their parents, but this kid is unusually humble with faith in God!
Bhet- meeting of sukh and dukh. So deep! Maasoli- amazing comparison of real life adnyan to the ocean surrounding us. Mann, Bhowra are beautiful- His soul is more alive than any living body. My chair and Me--he had the insight.
Unseen light — he can enter into the mind of a new born just as easily as he can enter into the mind of a very learned man.
Many poems touch upon the rat race these kids face.My Alarm clock, Shahjahan’s restaurant, autobiography of a football, Ghost doesn’t shave, Tiger, worm love are so cute.
Kachrewala is very thoughtful- so much respect for kachrewala too!
Thanks for publishing the poems!
Shashikant Lagwankar
24 Feb 2015 10 01 PM
Dear Nitin Ji,
Today I almost read complete book of poems.
The poems are very simple, melodious. Written by innocent boy. They really touch the heart. 🌸🌸
Phakta Mazee Aai, Maze Baba, Mazee Aajee reflect his experience🌸🌸
I feel that he was very much attached to home and family🌸🌸
Poet likes his poetry to be read by all. I feel blog should created on net and all the poems to be there.
Lot of readers, lot of friends and lot of well wishers will read.🌻🌻
rajkamal srivastava
07 Feb 2015 03 46 PM
I read Jaydeep's poem in one go yesterday night. What's intriguing is the young boy's philosophical depth, mystical candour, altruism -articulated with elan. It has glimpses of spirituality, seemingly spontaneous. The innocence of youth flows with gay abandon. The unabated flow of emotions is lyrical and haunting. Shades of Bhakti saints' like Dyaneshwar too seem evident. Sometimes his cascading thoughts leave the eyes moist and the mind, numb. Such eloquence and profound sensitivity is seldom present. Jaydeep indeed seems to be a "Deep" of joy. Such overflowing emotions penned without inhibitions can only come from someone so ordained with a divine insight. I am sure that this book and the poetry will not fade into oblivion. Some pieces of art are immortal, eternal. I think every person who has love for literature, poetry should read this book. Particularly the younger generation to which he belongs.
Poems from his collection can be included in the Text book for Class IXth and above. Raj Srivastava.